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Dialogue - Wedding Planners

Prompt: Write a scene using only dialogue—no tags, no action beats, no “he said/she said.” Two people are having a conversation where one is trying to confess something, but the other keeps accidentally steering the conversation away before they can get it out.
The challenge: Make each speaker’s voice distinct enough that a reader always knows who’s talking.
Bonus: The confession never actually happens.

“You know what? I don’t even really miss going to any of our old places.”
“For sure.”
“Not Wendy’s, not Arby’s, not Long John Silver’s. It’s all just trash really. It’s not good for you. I remember how sick I would feel after. Don’t you find you have so much more energy now, too? I feel like I could climb a mountain.”
“I feel like you could, too.”
“Not you?”
“I mean, not really.”
“Well maybe not a mountain, but I definitely feel better overall. Like I actually felt like going to the gym tonight. I didn’t need to force myself to. I just wanted to go.”
“Ha, yeah, you hate going to the gym.”
“I know, right?!? I didn’t think I would ever get back into going. Even though I was paying for it. And I feel like we’re saving so much money by not eating out.”
“Hrmh, really?”
“Yeah, you don’t think so? I think it’ll add up to where we’ll be able to get both the photographer and the DJ we want.”
“That’s awesome.”
“Remember how much we liked the DJ at Kelly’s wedding in 2023. I think we’ll be able to get him with our January plan.”
“I’m not the best at plans, January or otherwise.”
“Yeah, I know. That’s probably why we work. My ex used to try and plan what I was going to wear. And I actually used to let him sometimes. Barf.”
“You know, fast food really never made me that sick. I think it’s probably because I was raised on it. It’s why I’ve—”
“Given it up just for me.”
“I don’t miss Wendy’s or Arby’s, but I—”
“I can’t believe you miss Long John Silver’s. That place is trash. Why did we do that to ourselves? Fast food fish.”
“They have hush puppies, too.”
“Ugh. It should be outlawed. They should burn every copy that ever existed of Treasure Island just for inspiring it.”
“I like to ring the bell.”
“What bell?”
“The bell. You ring it on your way out if you’ve had good service. Last time, I was in there, I rang the bell. It made me feel good.”
“We’ll get you a bell. Ooooo…at the wedding, everyone gets a bell.”


Character Sketch - The Mail Carrier

Prompt: Write a short character sketch of someone doing the most mundane task imaginable.

46 mailboxes in the building. Berniece’s favorite 'cause it’s the last one. Usually, she gets here a little sooner, but it’s been a long day. New dentist in the neighborhood who wants to get the word out. Dr. Peters. Dr. Raymond J. Peters. Sounds more like an attorney, Berniece thought. She looked at his face and family staring back at her as she had done at every mailbox in the neighborhood today. Nice-looking smile but a little light on hair at his age, Berniece thought. She turned the key, opened the box for 1A, and placed the glossy print inside. Cute family, too. Berniece chuckled and thought, if you’re into that sort of thing. A few people began to trickle into the mailroom to get their mail, their first stop after coming home. Berniece could feel someone waiting behind her, but she continued to the mailbox for 1B. A man shyly said, “Excuse me,” and Berniece loudly and proudly said, “Oh, am I in your way, dear? Which box is yours?” He pointed to his mailbox and said, “That’s me. I’m 1A.” Berniece usually didn’t pay much attention, but she took a good, hard look at this man’s teeth and noticed he had one of those old silver fillings just like her. He got his mail out of the box, said thank you, and left the mailroom. Berniece gathered the next apartment’s mail and watched as he exited the mailroom with his full head of jet-black hair.